I got a forwarded mail regarding a competition which appeared in Washington Post, the competition asked for a two-line rhyme with the most romantic first line, but the least romantic second line.
I am not sure if this competition is genuine but it was a good challenge. So I thought it would be a great idea to try something like this.
This is the poem I came up with-
My darling when I saw you, I fell in love for the first time,
On retrospect that is till date my most horrendous crime.
The beautiful twinkle of your eyes and the tinge of light blue,
The bill of those contacts on my credit card are still due.
Your lovely walk, inviting a thousand glances and riveting stares,
Why do I see walking them going only towards shopping malls & fairs.
Your lovely voice my dear, speaks to my mind and music to my ears,
I am watching cricket, so just be quite and stay clear.
The immense love and special chemistry between us we share,
For heaven’s sake stop scaring me in the nightmares.
Darling you are so beautiful, sensuous, amazing and hot,
I just hope my lies never get caught.
Your face beautiful like moon, body with curves like crescent,
Why you want these sexy dresses, instead try wearing a tent.
We are meant to be together, your love is my life and luck,
Is this my destiny my lord!! What the F**K!!
Are you wondering that how I managed to make this poem rhyme,
Plain joblessness, my sinister with a lie told in every second line.
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An Amorous Antithesis
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holas!….one more gem from your pen..:))..loved the poem..:))
@Deepti: Thank you Thank you
Brilliant!
Really cracked me up :0)
@Meera: That was the intention… I hope one of the female readers of the blag don’t put a crack on me after reading this one
LOL.. Is it true that the first line, which refer to fiction, take time to shape but the second ones, the reality ones, come up in a jiffy??
@Rush.Me: how did you know… Seems like you have been researching a lot on the subject.
Too good! Brilliant work.
@Neha: Thanks
LOL!
Why you want these sexy dresses, instead try wearing a tent.
ha ha ha ha! applicable to so many, thanks to the pizzas and the burgers!
@Vinni: How can you forget the chocolates.
that’s really funny… & seems u completed the challenge very comfortably… but I pray to god that your wife would not have read this…..
http://iankits.blogspot.com
@Ankit: Oh she already has… so I am keeping my fingers crossed.
This is hilarious and well writtern, may be you should have sent it to the contest and may be you should never give the post address to wifeee
@Sri: Thanks man…
I thought u wanted to talk to me something
nice
how is the sore throat?
@Reema: Its better…
finally got the time to comment
hilarious brilliant one this
@Monika: Thank you
all your posts bring a smile on my face..but this one is just out of the world
@Anshima: I am so glad that I was able to make someone smile. All the efforts in writing the post was worth it.
kya idea hai sir jee
ROFL! Excellent. Wit and intelligence, all rolled into one.
Blogrolling you
@Pallavi: Thank you so much for the honor of being in your roll. Will visit your blog.
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Thanks a lot for the honor.
lol… good one….
here’s one more:
Your eyes, your smile, your looks, everything is so pretty.
Its just that your voice reminds me of Mayawati.
hope it rhymes..
@Kedar: Wow man thats better than any one…Reminds me of the suemaya hashtag we were doing on twitter some days back. It was good fun.
Hey Prats,
Nice poem..and great going!..Nice web-space!
Will keep visiting
@Megha: Will look forward to see you here often
Very well written.
Really liked this.
Cheers
preeti
@Preeti: Really, coming from an author like you this is a great compliment.
Too Good!
First Line- What a guy says
Second Line – What a guy actually means!
Will keep this in mind,it can come handy
@Akansha: Thanks
awesome-ness! so where do we start now?
@Sahil: Thanks. you tell me I am game
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Headed to this priceless gem from Tiku’s blog! Awesome. This is verse tadka maar key!
@Phoenixritu: Tadka Maar Key….Lollzz koshish puri ki thi
Hii.. Got the link from your nominations at AGB Awards ‘ 2009!!
I remember receiving the mail too.. And I had quite enjoyed it..
Now this is something brilliant.. Couldn’t help but comment. Too good!
Keep up!
Ambika
@Ambika: Thanks a lot. Hope to see you here often.
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Lol, a really good one!! Kudos.
@Shail: Thanks.
I had left a comment on this post
Anyway all I wanted to say was that this sounds like a lot of fun
@IHM: Lollzzz it is