Feb
18
This is my first attempt at a 55er, posting it anyway so that I can break the block I am facing in writing new posts. Need your feedback on the 55ers so that I can write better ones in future. So comments and feedback are desperately looked forward to.
And yes for the updates, yeah, I got married, joined a new job and moved to Bangalore. Will post more detailed updates all the areas later till then enjoy this 55er.
He entered the bus and saw her amidst the crowd; he went and stood right ahead of her, his elbows brushing her bosom.
He was enjoying the touch when he felt her hand inside his trouser pockets. He closed his eyes in ecstasy, opening them only to find her gone.
And so was his wallet.
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Tags: 55er, Heart Break, Life
hahaha.. good one.. but somehow kinda expected the end[maybe cos i write stuff similar to this.:)]
Welcome back to blogging world..glad to have met u thru Twitter!!
@Aarti: I agree the Idea was predictable specially for someone who writes 55ers. Glad to meet you as well
Idea is behind the 55er is good, typical 55-erish.
Keep going!
@Poonam: Thanks
Good start! May be you could try few more ideas to create much more captivity till the last word
Welcome to bangalore… All the best with your new life and job
@Mohan: Thanks for the warm welcome. Will keep the suggestions in mind for my next posts.
Thats how it starts again! one small post at a time; and the writer’s block will vanish eventually!
@Vinni: I am counting on it bro.
ha ha great start… and serves him right
welcome to blore ofcourse…
BTW in ur welcome there is a post up on my blog… for u
@Monika: True… Thanks for the post loved it absolutely
hehehe a taste of his own medicine haan??
Good one!! and yes Congrats & welcome back 
@Smita: Absolutely, tit for tat. Isn’t it?
Ha, good one. Didn’t expect this twist. Well done!
@Pal: Thanks
LOL
congrats on marriage and job!
@Reema: Thanks and I must say same to you too
Good one! Loved it!
@Akanhsa: Thanks
Good one
and congrats on the wedding!
@Bhavya: Thanks
Good one. The best thing to do to him!
Heartiest congratulations. For the wifey, Bangy and Job too
@Meira: Thanks a lot.
Good one. I like poetic justice
@IHM: Yeah you would