Comments on: The Railway Station

By: Vote for Me | Ginger & Cardamom

Vote for Me | Ginger & Cardamom — Wed, 21 Oct 2009 04:16:27 +0000

[...] for the contest are as following- An Amorous Antithesis Just Another Day The High Way To Drive The Railway Station [...]

By: Prats

Prats — Sat, 16 May 2009 06:15:00 +0000

@partywithneha: Really, Hotel California... I read it now may be yes because it starts with I am sitting...

@TeekhiMirchi: Thank you

@Tanvi: Well I will write one in leisure time and post it soon.

@Reema: Thanks

By: Reema

Reema — Thu, 14 May 2009 13:26:00 +0000

u write good poems

By: Tanvi

Tanvi — Thu, 14 May 2009 09:28:00 +0000

I absolutely love the metaphor..interesting.

And if u have written this in a hurry, I am curious to read what you would come up with in leisure time.

Poems are not all about rhyming. Take it from someone who has spent her last 3 yrs reading poems (for educational purpose) haha.

By: Teekhi Mirchi

Teekhi Mirchi — Thu, 14 May 2009 09:16:00 +0000

Well observed, felt and written.. poems need not rhym all the times..
Good going